Another Man's Trash

Wow! This game was so entertaining to play! I loved all of the different routes you can take and how intense things got (especially after the witch hunt.) Even though there doesn't seem to be too much control given to the player, it still felt engaging and fun to play.

My main critique would be to look over the game for grammatical errors and to add a reset button.

I really enjoyed this, and I absolutely think that the colored text works a lot for the story. I also like how much we care for Hippo. I guess really the only thing is if you can, I would recommend adding a reset button at the end of the stories so that the player can go back to the start easier, but its still good

I really loved the narrative of the game, and it was clear how much we cared for Hippo. It was easy to see the care our character had for him, and it made me determined to save him as well. My main critique is that it feels like your character isn't as dedicated to saving him as you would think, since they never intentionally look for something to save him in the different time periods. I think adding a line or two about how you're hoping the butterfly effect will save him could help this, or by adding in more exploration in the time periods (though that's beyond scope I'm sure.) The game was well written beyond a few grammar mistakes, and I was really invested in the story!